This weeks picture prompt from Microfiction Monday at Stony River
The task: a tweetable 140 characters or fewer inspired by the picture below...
She just wasn't sure she could make it ...
the moment he'd taken off his shoes the pong had hit her
so bad it had made her eyes water.
21 comments:
I did wonder about the smell. Now I know.
LOL - I love it! :-)
Yeah...she looks kind of wobbly, doesn't she?
I think if this is first date, there won't be a second! Great microfiction.
Have a lovely week x
Then, a good airing is what they both need. What a clever angle!
Whoa! She is listing a smitch, isn't she? Poor girl. Yep, she'll probablly go down any second now. RATS! that will put her right at the pong-source! THIS COULD BE FATAL! I'm going to go ahead and dial 911, just in case!
(Great mM take!)
LOL This picture struck you and I with the same thought!
When I looked at the picture first I though she was leading him, maybe she is holding on to keep from passing out.
This was good
awww.. poor she :D
Must have been quite a party ;)
Would it be too pushy for her to ask him to put his shoes back on his feet where they belong? LOL--good one this week!
Cheers!
After enough miles, the dirt will rub off the smell.
LOL...poor thing. Sorta like cutting an onion. :) Very well done :) Have a great week :)
She's still holding his hand, so that's a good sign, :O)
Deborah,
We were thinking along the same lines this week but your gal suffered more! LOL! Good 140.
~Jean
I feel for that poor girl :)
I know just how she feels. I used to make my ex- leave his shoes out side and wash his feet the moment he came in the door!
ol the only thing worse than stinky feet, bad breath lol
hahaha...good one! :-)
And another one's crossed off the 'Maybe I'll Marry...' list LOL
Thank you all so much for stopping by and for your lovely comments x :o)
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