Written for Sunday Scribblings prompt 245 - Limits
She was never sure where she ended and others began
she was grey, beige at best
never a colour, yet for a few moments when
she became fully present
and it was too much
for her
preferring the safety of shadows
blending, invisible
playing a part and doing it well
in her boundless prison
but there came a day
when she found a key
to her imaginary doors
and opened them to a gentle shade
but a colour never the less
and she began anew
and she found where she finished and others began
and it was there
dressed in lilac
that I saw her last.
17 comments:
Oooh, I like this! The starkness of it and then the pop of the subtle lilac at the end! And I like how you come full circle by echoing the first line near the end.
This is beautiful, I love it!
What a beutiful poem - finding colour again and the key to your dreams..each word was a perfect piece of the whole..Jae :)
Thank you everso much for your comments x
This is an incredible piece of writing. I love it for all kinds of reasons. The images are stark, yet fulfill the emotional content attached to them. Brava! You done good.
Elizabeth
Deborah,
This is so lovely. The idea of being in those beiges and shadows, never feeling authentic. Then "coming out" in lilac. Delicious poem. Glad I ran into y'all again at Sun Scrib, since I've been somewhat absent (and will be spotty until Feb, when our move to Madison, WI is complete). Peace, Amy
I like it--all black and white and then, not riotous color, but a subtle shade of personality unveiled like dew in the sunshine. Great work.
Beautiful poem! I really like it.
how beautiful - and what a trumph - in lilac :)
Isn't it a wonderful thing when a beige gal shows her true colors?
lovely
Yay for her! Lilac is so much better than grey! Loved the wording "boundless prison".
A dreamy piece but full of meaningful psychological undertones.
Oh, that's lovely.
Thank you again for your comments, they are much appreciated x
i so like this!! kudos to you on this write up...
stopping by from SS
happy blogging! :)
Splendid work...a very good read :)
Thanks so much for stopping by and your comments x
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