It feels like ages since I've posted, so I thought I'd join in with
Jenny Matlocks Saturday Centus shake up this week.
Use 32 words including the line "In the autumn"
to write 'lyrics' to the tune of Twinkle Twinkle Little Star!
Well here goes ... clear your throat and prepare to sing :o)
Confetti gold, jewelled lanes
In the autumn summer wanes.
Scarlet skies as evenings call
prepared for winter, bronzes fall.
Beds and blankets, nests to sleep
warm inside as winter creeps.
51 comments:
i am going to have that tune stuck in my head all day...ha
That's lovely! (I just sang it.) :-)
Good to see a new post from you. x)
Nice one! Made me want to snuggle with a blanket on the couch!
I love "confetti gold":@)
Beautiful...
Beautiful! In this part of Texas we really don't get to experience autumn with golden anything. Unless you count this drought where everything that ought to be green is a golden brown.
Erika
Artful Rising
Deborah,
Thank you for stopping by and your nice comments.
I too like 'confetti gold'.
Scarlet skies are my favourite.
They keep me hoping for good weather :)
Made me want to curl up with a good book and hot chocolate...missed you...Bravo !
My fav time of year and life!
Goodness! Some great vocabulary there to paint a homely picture!
There's a picture prompt here if you fancy it! http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2011/09/12/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week-10/
You have caught the very essence of autumn - well done:-)
Definitely time to snuggle down for fall!
Oh, this was very good, I was thinking of somethin silly.
Beds and blankets! Singing my tune!
Waaaaa! Why couldn't I have come up with something that lovely!!!! Waaaaaa!
What a sweet imagery your created for this melody that's going to drive Brian insane.
This is lovely. It sent me searching for my favorite comforter!
Namaste........cj
Lovely. I'm about ready for a change of season. And Fall is one of my favs!~Ames
wonderful verse.
:)
Vivid images.
=)
This is such a nice, cozy piece. Great work.
xoRobyn
nice and cozy ... i want to curl up in a blanket! very visual!
How cute! Very lovely.
I love the cosy hibernating image in the end...wonderful piece.
Funny what Brian said, it's a tune that sticks, love those scarlet skies!
Well, you just put the rest of us to shame!! What a simply beautiful piece!
Glad you like all my pictures on my side-bars!!
Oooo, I like the thought of a bed being my nest:-) Great write.
haha well i have some troubles with twinkle twinkle but i thought your little poem was lovely!
Leontien
Beautifully written. Such lovely words your wrote. Loved it!!
Oh, this song is so sweet, it echoes
in the mind because of the lilting
quality.
You always amaze me with you ability to meet these challenges. You have a talent.
Thank you all everso much for your lovely comments :o) xxx
Dear Deborah,
Thanks for visiting my tune!
Glad you are back with SC!
Your song has a lot of lovely images with gorgeous autumn colours: golden, bronze, scarlet. You have captured well the feel of the change in season; lamenting the end of summer and embracing that which is good about fall.
Best wishes,
Anna
For the benefit of other readers:
Anna's SC wk 72'In the Autumn'
Thank you for yur lovely coment Anna :o) x
Love it!
Thank you Nimaruichi :o) x
great centus
Well done. Great imagery, and it went well with the tune too. laurie @ Battling My Inner Critic
Thank you beckyp and Laurie :o) x
that was awesome.
:o) Thank you Dazee x
Lovely, Deborah!
Thank you earlybird :o) x
I like the scarlet skies as evening calls. Gorgeous. I am singing away!
:o) Thank you Selma xx
Wow! That was brilliant! Great job!
:o) Thank you Tgoette x
Wow. I love this. I sang it and it was perfect! Love the word confetti and the cozy feeling this little gem evoked!
One of my favorites this week!
Aaw thank you Jenny :o) x
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