Saturday, 23 July 2011

Before I Die ... Saturday Centus # 64

Umm ... this was the first thing that popped into my head 

... better clear the beaches!


Before I die

I want to run

Naked into a turquoise sea

Sun kissing my skin

Glorious

Unashamed

Joyful

ALIVE!




Week 64 of Saturday Centus this weeks prompt is to use just 15 words (not including the prompt) using the line "... Before I die I want to ..."

46 comments:

Cheryl said...

Wouldn't we all! Live life to the fullest.

Clipped Wings said...

Wonderful! I did go skinny dipping once with my sister on a secluded beach in broad daylight :) probably only because I lived in a small town and one could do that sometimes without being detected, lol.

Viki said...

I might consider this if no one was watching LOL. I loved this.

Karen S. said...

Oh yes, you have put in print what most of us would envy doing....very good!

jfb57 said...

How refreshing & alive! I would love to join you!

jabblog said...

Me too - but I wouldn't want to frighten the horses - or anyone else, for that matter.

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

This is such a freeing piece. Great centus. It makes me smile!
xoRobyn

Sue said...

Perfect!

=)

Christine said...

That does sound like a lot of fun.

Anna said...

Lovely thoughts! I was actually expecting more texts like yours. I started writing in a similar vain, but gave it up because I could not get the rhythm and rhime to work.

Best wishes,
Anna

'Before I die...'-Anna's SC wk 64

Eva Gallant said...

I'm a big fan of skinny-dipping!

Eva Gallant said...

I'm a big fan of skinny-dipping!

Dazee Dreamer said...

go for it!!!!! I think that would be awesome

Jo said...

full out life! beautiful!!!

Mama Zen said...

I love this one!

Mama Zen said...

I love this one!

Madeline said...

Very creative!

laurie @ bargain hunting said...

Well done! laurie

Reflections said...

What a fabulous piece. Excellent choice to toast by the Everyday Goddess.

Mamma has spoken said...

Sounds great if I had a wonderful body. I would be too afraid that someone would see me and think that they need to quit drinking because they just saw a whale save itself by going back into the ocean :o/

That Janie Girl said...

Awesome, awesome piece. Congratulations on the Goddess award!

Wanderer said...

A wish we can all relate to. But I'd be too afraid someone would see me and be frightened.

That Janie Girl said...

That's cool!

What is a beach?

Okay, just kidding, but I do live in the desert!!

Thanks for coming by and thanking me for my Goddess award! I'll be following you now. Come back to see me!

Deborah said...

Thank you all for stopping by and your wonderful comments, I really appreciate them x :o)

5thsister said...

I love the yearning for freedom expressed in this poem! Excellent!

cj Schlottman said...

This piece is infectious. Now I want to run out there with you, only Mama would be disappointed if I didn't wear at least a strand of pearls.

Namaste.........cj

Deborah said...

:o) Thank you so much for the comments cj and 5thsister :o)

Lynette Killam said...

Oh, I do love this, Deborah...a secret wish of my own! Such freedom and lack of inhibition would surely be the ultimate in empowerment!

Thanks, too, for stopping by and leaving lovely birthday greetings on my page...it's much appreciated:)

Deborah said...

My pleasure Lynette, and thank you x :o)

jeff campbell said...

This is so fine...may I go with you? Peace and blessings

Deborah said...

As long as you promise to keep your eyes shut! LOL
Thanks for stopping by Jeff x :o)

gautami tripathy said...

Go ahead!!

puerile ennui

Selma said...

You should do it. Singing as you plunge into the water. That would be fantastic :D

Deborah said...

I'd love to Selma and Guatami, but as jabblog said, I wouldn't want to frighten the horses! LOL
Thanks so much for stopping by x :o)

Nonna Beach said...

Perfection in the writing and so fun to think about doing if no one was around !

Deborah said...

Thank you Nonna :o) x

upinthecosmos said...

LOL, full out freedom at it's best:-)

Deborah said...

Thank you upinthecosmos x :o)

Rek said...

I love this wish...live life queen size (king didn't sound quite right) :)

Deborah said...

Hehe ... Thank you Rek x :o)

Jenny said...

Oh, what a lovely wish!

I wish this for you, too!

Do it!

Don't even look around.

Drop your clothes, throw back your head and let the wind catch your hair and jump in.

I bet the water would be fine!

Lovely sentiment.

Deborah said...

I may just do it! LOL
Thanks for stopping by Jenny x :o)

yogurt said...

I'm right behind you, no pun intended! Ar, ar!

Deborah said...

LOL ... thanks for stopping by yoghurt x :o)

earlybird said...

YES!

Deborah said...

:o) LOL thanks earlybird x