Umm ... this was the first thing that popped into my head
... better clear the beaches!
Before I die
I want to run
Naked into a turquoise sea
Sun kissing my skin
Glorious
Unashamed
Joyful
ALIVE!
Week 64 of Saturday Centus this weeks prompt is to use just 15 words (not including the prompt) using the line "... Before I die I want to ..."
46 comments:
Wouldn't we all! Live life to the fullest.
Wonderful! I did go skinny dipping once with my sister on a secluded beach in broad daylight :) probably only because I lived in a small town and one could do that sometimes without being detected, lol.
I might consider this if no one was watching LOL. I loved this.
Oh yes, you have put in print what most of us would envy doing....very good!
How refreshing & alive! I would love to join you!
Me too - but I wouldn't want to frighten the horses - or anyone else, for that matter.
This is such a freeing piece. Great centus. It makes me smile!
xoRobyn
Perfect!
=)
That does sound like a lot of fun.
Lovely thoughts! I was actually expecting more texts like yours. I started writing in a similar vain, but gave it up because I could not get the rhythm and rhime to work.
Best wishes,
Anna
'Before I die...'-Anna's SC wk 64
I'm a big fan of skinny-dipping!
I'm a big fan of skinny-dipping!
go for it!!!!! I think that would be awesome
full out life! beautiful!!!
I love this one!
I love this one!
Very creative!
Well done! laurie
What a fabulous piece. Excellent choice to toast by the Everyday Goddess.
Sounds great if I had a wonderful body. I would be too afraid that someone would see me and think that they need to quit drinking because they just saw a whale save itself by going back into the ocean :o/
Awesome, awesome piece. Congratulations on the Goddess award!
A wish we can all relate to. But I'd be too afraid someone would see me and be frightened.
That's cool!
What is a beach?
Okay, just kidding, but I do live in the desert!!
Thanks for coming by and thanking me for my Goddess award! I'll be following you now. Come back to see me!
Thank you all for stopping by and your wonderful comments, I really appreciate them x :o)
I love the yearning for freedom expressed in this poem! Excellent!
This piece is infectious. Now I want to run out there with you, only Mama would be disappointed if I didn't wear at least a strand of pearls.
Namaste.........cj
:o) Thank you so much for the comments cj and 5thsister :o)
Oh, I do love this, Deborah...a secret wish of my own! Such freedom and lack of inhibition would surely be the ultimate in empowerment!
Thanks, too, for stopping by and leaving lovely birthday greetings on my page...it's much appreciated:)
My pleasure Lynette, and thank you x :o)
This is so fine...may I go with you? Peace and blessings
As long as you promise to keep your eyes shut! LOL
Thanks for stopping by Jeff x :o)
Go ahead!!
puerile ennui
You should do it. Singing as you plunge into the water. That would be fantastic :D
I'd love to Selma and Guatami, but as jabblog said, I wouldn't want to frighten the horses! LOL
Thanks so much for stopping by x :o)
Perfection in the writing and so fun to think about doing if no one was around !
Thank you Nonna :o) x
LOL, full out freedom at it's best:-)
Thank you upinthecosmos x :o)
I love this wish...live life queen size (king didn't sound quite right) :)
Hehe ... Thank you Rek x :o)
Oh, what a lovely wish!
I wish this for you, too!
Do it!
Don't even look around.
Drop your clothes, throw back your head and let the wind catch your hair and jump in.
I bet the water would be fine!
Lovely sentiment.
I may just do it! LOL
Thanks for stopping by Jenny x :o)
I'm right behind you, no pun intended! Ar, ar!
LOL ... thanks for stopping by yoghurt x :o)
YES!
:o) LOL thanks earlybird x
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