This wasn't the first time it had happened.
She was fed up with the amount of times she had said
'If only' to herself,
but as she left the toilet, here she was again,
it was happening all over again
the looks,
the comments,
the pointing,
the laughter,
She tugged at her boyfriends arm.
"Let's just get out of here!"
They rushed for the door, her boyfriend shielding her all the way as they made their way through the crowd and out to the safety of the street.
"Not again?"
She nodded and turned her back,
he dutifully eased the skirt out from her knickers again.
.... "That's one more pub we won't be going back to then!"
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14 comments:
This is one of my nightmares.
Tell me about it LOL :o)
Woops! I like that it reads like a conversation, good write!
Wonderfully imaginative. Can see it clearly, lol.
Elizabeth
I love it. lol
Excellent writing! I think a lot of women have experienced that - I know I have!
Really nice take on the prompt. :-)
Oops! This made me chuckle!
Pamela
A strong and meaningful poem. Vivid picture.
Wonderfully written =P Kind of amusing to read as wellXD
Great fun. If only she'd been wearing trousers! But if she had there'd have been no poem....
LOL! It happened to me once. Mortifying.
Thank you for all your comments, glad to know I'm not the only one it's happened to! :o)
WELCOME Deb.....thanks for your words and a wee chuckle
lol.. imaginative indeed.. this was a fun take :D
I'ld like to invite you to -Where the Pen meets the Perineum- Prompts go up on Tuesday. Hope you can make it..
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