Monday, 20 September 2010

Microfiction Monday # 49

This weeks picture prompt from Microfiction Monday at Stony River
The task: a tweetable 140 characters or fewer inspired by the picture below...


She just wasn't sure she could make it ...
the moment he'd taken off his shoes the pong had hit her
so bad it had made her eyes water.

21 comments:

MorningAJ said...

I did wonder about the smell. Now I know.

Susannah said...

LOL - I love it! :-)

ninotaziz said...

Yeah...she looks kind of wobbly, doesn't she?

Ellie said...

I think if this is first date, there won't be a second! Great microfiction.

Have a lovely week x

David said...

Then, a good airing is what they both need. What a clever angle!

SparkleFarkle said...

Whoa! She is listing a smitch, isn't she? Poor girl. Yep, she'll probablly go down any second now. RATS! that will put her right at the pong-source! THIS COULD BE FATAL! I'm going to go ahead and dial 911, just in case!

(Great mM take!)

Akelamalu said...

LOL This picture struck you and I with the same thought!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

When I looked at the picture first I though she was leading him, maybe she is holding on to keep from passing out.

This was good

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

awww.. poor she :D

Granny Sue said...

Must have been quite a party ;)

sylviamorice said...

Would it be too pushy for her to ask him to put his shoes back on his feet where they belong? LOL--good one this week!
Cheers!

Pat said...

After enough miles, the dirt will rub off the smell.

Thom said...

LOL...poor thing. Sorta like cutting an onion. :) Very well done :) Have a great week :)

Diane said...

She's still holding his hand, so that's a good sign, :O)

Ms.Daisy said...

Deborah,
We were thinking along the same lines this week but your gal suffered more! LOL! Good 140.




~Jean

septembermom said...

I feel for that poor girl :)

quilly said...

I know just how she feels. I used to make my ex- leave his shoes out side and wash his feet the moment he came in the door!

Scott said...

ol the only thing worse than stinky feet, bad breath lol

Marina said...

hahaha...good one! :-)

Susan at Stony River said...

And another one's crossed off the 'Maybe I'll Marry...' list LOL

Deborah said...

Thank you all so much for stopping by and for your lovely comments x :o)