Monday, 6 September 2010

Wait - Sunday Scribblings

Written for Sunday Scribblings prompt 231 - Wait

I weathered your uncertainty
your clumsiness
your youth
the words that never came
then one day it happened
and you saw me
and I breathed again
and I basked in your smile
and your eyes
and the warmth of your touch
and I knew 
at that moment
 that all of my waiting
had been
worth it.

11 comments:

Susannah said...

This is just beautiful.

Understanding Alice said...

Ths is nice, I especially liked
"you saw meand I breathed again" its just like that isnt it :)

Nessa said...

Wonderful ending.

Lilibeth said...

Good things do come to those who wait.You've captured one of those precisely.

jabblog said...

Excellent - a just reward for patience and perseverance.

Deborah said...

Thank you for the lovely comments x

gs batty said...

brought back some cute memories

septembermom said...

Gorgeous!

Someone Is Special said...

This is so beautiful wait..

Do stop by Someone Is Special to enjoy the wait..

--Someone Is Special--

oldegg said...

Do hope he was worth waiting for. It reminded me so much of those teenage crushes that seem so hopeless and yet at times work out. Mind you I was young egg then.

Deborah said...

Thank you all everso much for stopping by and for your lovely comments x :o)