Monday 6 September 2010

Wait - Sunday Scribblings

Written for Sunday Scribblings prompt 231 - Wait

I weathered your uncertainty
your clumsiness
your youth
the words that never came
then one day it happened
and you saw me
and I breathed again
and I basked in your smile
and your eyes
and the warmth of your touch
and I knew 
at that moment
 that all of my waiting
had been
worth it.

10 comments:

Susannah said...

This is just beautiful.

Understanding Alice said...

Ths is nice, I especially liked
"you saw meand I breathed again" its just like that isnt it :)

Nessa said...

Wonderful ending.

Lilibeth said...

Good things do come to those who wait.You've captured one of those precisely.

jabblog said...

Excellent - a just reward for patience and perseverance.

Deborah said...

Thank you for the lovely comments x

George S Batty said...

brought back some cute memories

septembermom said...

Gorgeous!

Someone is Special said...

This is so beautiful wait..

Do stop by Someone Is Special to enjoy the wait..

--Someone Is Special--

Old Egg said...

Do hope he was worth waiting for. It reminded me so much of those teenage crushes that seem so hopeless and yet at times work out. Mind you I was young egg then.