Monday, 1 November 2010

The Bunny Meeting - Monday's Child # 19

Monday's Child prompt for children's poetry or verse

He read aloud for them all to hear
"Our carrots will be scarce this coming year"
Miss Fluffytail wiped a tear from her eye
as without her carrots she was sure she would die!
Mr. Patches pink nose began to twitch
his dear wife so worried she began to itch.  
But Snowy was not one to panic at all
and gave a solution to suit them all.
 They'd take all their carrots that very same day
and share them between them, for that was their way.
 So this was how the bunny meeting came to an end
with carrots enough for all four special friends.

12 comments:

Jinksy said...

And very praiseworthy sentiments they were! lol :)

RawknRobynsGoneBlogWild said...

I love this fun piece. It's so much better than the well known nursery rhymes.
xoRobyn

Friko said...

Ah!
Do you have a child to read to? Certainly sounds like you've had a bit of experience with bunnies.

Sh@s said...

Sweet one :)

signed...bkm said...

Wow another Great Write on this prompt ...you and Jinksy got it going on these fun rabbits....do not think I can come up with anything to match you two...loved it all...I will have to pull a rabbit out of my hat to be on the same page as you two....bkm

Deborah said...

Thank you everso much for the comments everyone x

nimaruichi said...

Soooo sweet of Snowy... lovely poem to read out loud (and not just to kids, :) )

Peaceful Pandemonium said...

I so love this, yes I did!
It reminded me of learning as a kid. :)

jaerose said...

How adorable..this really made me feel toasty and warm inside - and the picture was bunny-tastic!..thanks as ever for your vist..Jae

Suz said...

loverly.

tess said...

It certainly does look like an accounting. I like the relationship between image and verse.

Deborah said...

Thank you so much for stopping by and for your comments x :o)