Monday 7 March 2011

Bethany Bunny's Book - Monday's Child # 36

Monday's Child prompt for children's poetry or verse

Bethany Bunny sat down to read
as a book in her hand was all that she'd need
to travel to places and faraway lands
for she knew it was magic she held in her hands.

She could ride across rainbows and swim in the seas
and sled down high mountains and climb in the trees
find unicorns, dragons and fairies and elves
and whisper gold secrets they'd keep to themselves.

Her adventures and friends would be there in her hand
to whisk her away to her own special land
and all this she'd do whilst tucked safe in her bed
as her eyes slowly closed with sweet dreams up ahead.

28 comments:

Susannah said...

Wonderful! I love your children's verses. :-)

Elaine said...

Always an adventure to read your verses. Great rhyming too!

Yvonne said...

Wow! A very nice blog. Your writing is wonderful. Thanks for checking my blog out and commenting.

Anonymous said...

What a wonderful world this take us into!

Deborah said...

Thank you all for visiting and your lovely comments x :o)

Jinksy said...

An ideal live, that...

mamahasspoken said...

Sounds like you have a wonderful beginning for a children's book! Love it!

Lynette Killam said...

How absolutely wonderful...and exactly how I feel about the magic world of books! I've not heard of this meme before, and will definitely look through your other entries...:)

Lynette
Imagination Lane

Crickit said...

Wonderful writing! Thank you for stopping by my blog...and your kind comment. I will be back! :)

signed...bkm said...

Bravo, Bravo...adore this write on the picture..just flowed effortlessly....Love it!! Thank you for sharing so much....bkm

Lisa said...

Brilliant! I love the melodic rolling of the verses! Thanks for sharing.

Deborah said...

Thank you al everso much for your lovely comments x :o)

Raven said...

That is so sweet. You are just amazing! I feel the same way about books.

RJ Clarken said...

Oh wow! I loved this! It totally describes the wonderfulness and joy of a child (of any age!) reading in bed! So cool!

Deborah said...

Thank you so much Raven x ... and Lightverse x :o)

cj Schlottman said...

Deborah,

This is charming! Don't know what else to say.....

Namaste..........cj

Deborah said...

Aaw thank you cj x :o)

jabblog said...

I know I meant to comment yesterday . . . anyway, better late than never;-)
you've captured the joy of reading absolutely perfectly!

Deborah said...

:o) ... thank you Jabblog, comments are welcome anytime! x

lissa said...

lovely rhyming and a lovely read. have a great day.

Lyn said...

This is what it's all about! Just terrific...

Deborah said...

Thank you everso much Lissa and Lynn x :o)

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

fairy tale indeed, up in the sky and deep in the sea,
love the imagery.

cheers.

Deborah said...

Thank you Jingle x :o)

Crystal said...

Wonderful little verse! :-)

Deborah said...

Thank you art2cee2 x :o)

Anonymous said...

My six year old niece would love this so much. I love it too. You got mad Bunny skillz.

Deborah said...

Thank you Selma x :o)