Things I would B
A sparrow, a daisy
a day by the sea
Chips and ice cream
afternoon tea
A walk with our dog
trees in the park
Black and white films
curled up in the dark
A place to come home to
a smile amidst tears
Someone who'll love you
the rest of her years
All these I would B
Poets United Prompt ... Take the 3rd letter of your first name to inspire a poem
38 comments:
Fun poem and clever use of that prompt.
lovely, lovely words.
And those are all things you can do, too!
Lovely whirl of words, thank you and thank you for visiting me and the lovely comment again, too. :)
Beautiful. :-)
All wonderful things to B!
I like it! Well done.
Wish my slow brain could write pretty poems.
But I didn't worry & start with the moans.
'Cause my finger's fast and phoned poem-gnomes!
W.C.C.
I think I would be a mushroom, or a tall glass of tea.
You have such a gift and a way with words. Well done.
Such a happy, upbeat piece. Made me smile!
Love the little poem!
Thanks!
i was intrigued by your little butterfly and caterpillar and i came over!
I'm glad i did!
Leontien
Oh, how lovely, Deborah! A wonderful list of things you are and still want to B...a very clever take on the prompt!
I liked it - clever play on 'b'.
Your writing is a delight. Uplifting and heartwarming. I think you ARE many of those things and more!
What a great list of comforts. Nicely done.
Fun poem and apt to the prompt...
Yup, I go for all those - and the poem itself. Well done.
Thank you everso much everyone for all your lovely comments, they're much appreciated xxx :o)
nice - you infuse the fun into poems
Sounds like fun. Think I'll work on this later!
And a lovely poem came to "B" !!
Lovely use of words to describe how you felt. What an expression you have here in your poem. Sweet, smooth, and inspiring.
thank you for visiting mine earlier and leaving me kind words too. :)
Thank you so much for your comments xx :o)
Interesting things to be :-)
What talent! Lovely poem.
Thank you everso much for stopping by and your comments :o) x
I really love this sweet poem. It is B-eautiful!
:o) Thank you Lydia x
Ooh, I like that very much. What a good idea for a prompt, too:-)
How beautiful!
All things that one would like to B.
Blessings
Thank you everso much jabblog and Bethe77 x :o)
It was Beautiful...I love your choices! Great job on B
Thank you Ella :o) x
A beautiful list of things to B (smiles)
:o) Thank you Sheila x
lovely.. you've put poetry into everyday things..
So sweet to read...
Nice to meet you ~
Nice to meet you too, thank you heaven ... thank you heaven, so lovely to say :o) x
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