Wednesday, 17 August 2011

Skyward - Three Word Wednesday


Eyes skyward
I feast on cobalt blue.

White confetti rains
dove drenched 
winged and alive.

A viable canvas
for dreams.

I gasp, smile
rendered mute.


 Three Word Wednesday where you write something using the three prompt words.   This week's words are ...  gasp, mute and viable.

33 comments:

Everyday Goddess said...

The glory of our world is astounding, I agree!

Elizabeth Grimes said...

Refreshing. :)

Cynthia said...

Well-written so that I can visualize
the beauty of the sky and beyond.
I fell for the spirituality of
your poem.

vivinfrance said...

Great it is to appreciate our world.

Thanks for your visit to my blog.

jaerose said...

A sky full of possibilities..one that makes you gasps when you see it..grab it whilst you can absolutely..Jae

Scribbler said...

"winged and alive" - as if the dreamer is an angel :) Beautiful

Sheilagh Lee said...

sometimes nature in all it's glory awes us.

Tarang Sinha said...

Lovely & Smart piece of writing!

Deborah said...

Thank you all everso much for visiting, and for your lovely comments x :o)

That gentleman's lady said...

Sunsets do that to me, especially as I walk past my kitchen window.

Monkey Man said...

What a vivid image you paint.

Mamma has spoken said...

Beautiful and peaceful.

riotousam said...

Very lovely. (:

oldegg said...

The picture your words painted was so easy to visualise. Beautiful.

Deborah said...

Thank you everso much for your comments everyone x :o)

Muhammad Israr said...

lovely words :)

dandeliongirl01 said...

Love - A viable canvas
for dreams. Beautiful image.

Lydia said...

You gave those three words a place to dwell in celebration of nature. Very soulful.

That Janie Girl said...

That's good thinking, girly! I love it!

Daydreamertoo said...

When we feel the joy of life there's no better feeling, is there?
You've caught that feeling here with this. Lovely.
And, thanks for visiting me and the comment, too.

Deborah said...

Thank you all for your lovely comments :o) x

Laurie Kolp said...

Beautiful, vivid!

Monica Manning said...

"feast on cobalt blue". I yearn to tilt my face to the sky and just breath. One day...

Beautiful, Deborah.

Linda said...

"Eyes skyward I feast on cobalt blue." My eyes are often skyward, so I really related to that line of your poem.

Selma said...

You have a really visual style of writing that I really love. You can just see it and convey what it is in such a lyrical way. The image of the viable canvas for dreams is gorgeous. This is one of my favourite pieces of yours!

Deborah said...

Thank you everso much for your comments everyone xxx

jennifaye said...

i'm reading through the links at three word wednesday. so far, this is my favorite. :)

Deborah said...

Aaw thank you so much jennifaye x :o)

Kim Nelson said...

The natural world overwhelms me this way sometimes. Gifts all around.
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/19/failed-migration/

Jessica Prescott said...

Paints a beautiful picture.

Deborah said...

Thank you Kim and Jessica :o) x

Bethe77 said...

Love the use of the words on this prompt.
I love the sky myself!
Wonderful!
Blessings

Deborah said...

Thank you so much Beth77 x :o)