He couldn't help but admire her - the way she had the confidence to walk like that; hips wiggling like they were alive, independent of her waist.
He called her 'a piece of work', joked she'd cause an accident, have cars running off the road - said she ought to have a licence for that thing.
They were best friends.
Truth was he was smitten and would follow her to the ends of the earth - if only she'd ask him.
She ruffled his hair. "Come on pig face, let's get a coffee."
Three Word Wednesday where you write something using the three prompt words. This week's words are ... admire, piece and follow.
54 comments:
Haha- cute ending!
Reminds me of a line in a country song: "We hate to see her leave, but we love to watch her go." :)
So cute story...
So lucky to have that confidence to know that he will foolow her to the end of earth...
bless her,
bless him.
lovely story told.
I could so hear this converstation. Great write and wonderful use of the words.
Blessing
Great affection in this. Enjoyed the read.
My kind of love-lines......! Nicely fitted....!
Aah, it's good to read you again..you never fail to make me smile..Jae :)
I really enjoyed how you used the words! Brilliantly done :)
aw I hope she notices his feelings soon and feels the same
Pig face? That's not a good sign. Poor guy.
Such stuff makes my day. So cute :]
Thank you everso much everyone for your great comments :o) x
He sounds like a love sick puppy.. awww... Hope she doens't insult him too much ;)
Thanks for the smile.
I have heard 'pig-face' used as a term of endearment; it worked then too.
I really admire this piece of yours. If I didn't already, I would follow you.
Pig face, huh?
Hmmmmm, I'm up for some bacon.
An endearing poem!!
hahaha... you got me there... I like it.. lot's of fun from top to bottom...
JJRod'z
If it wasn't a doting bloke it could well have been a faithful dog. Either way I was smitten with them both.
Love the bit about pig face!
Pig face and yet he loves her. I need a man like that.
this poem is not only well written
but very true to life.
A humorous ending. I enjoyed reading this piece! My 3WW: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/10/12/believe/
Thank you so much for your comments, they really made me smile :o) x
Awww. If only.... This was gorgeous!
:o) Thanks Selma xx
yes, I've known it to happen.
I know other comments noted 'Pig Face' but I was going on, really enjoying the images of your prose and then I hit 'Pig Face' and it was like getting hit in the face with a cream pie! Laughing all the way to the 'facilities' so I can clean myself up! GREAT! W.C.C.
it's a real cute story... Bless you...
Aw! Cute, yet bittersweet.
ahan... cute little poem ...and lol@ pig face...
hope didnt cause any accidents on the road :)
Thank you so much for your lovely comments :o) xx
Awh...
This made me smile... It's altogether too true sometimes.
Thanks Lady x :o)
Update soon, love.:)
Will do :o) Thanks Crystal x
So sweet - unrequited love.
:o) thanks for stopping by jabblog x
I enjoyed reading it! Such a nice story :)
Thank you Gizmo :o) x
ahhh, love your story and I can write those three words into once sentence...
I certainly admire that piece of artwork; therefore, I must follow her success.
:o) well done! Thanks for stopping by Tracy x
Awwww, this is the stuff great songs are made of!!!
I love it sweetie!
God bless ya and have a fantastic weekend!!! :o)
Thanks Nezzy, and lovely to see you :o) x
It sounds like love to me!!
xo Catherine
:o) certainly does! Thanks for stopping by Catherine x
Awww, this is adorable! Like anthonynorth said in his comments: "Great affection in this." Affection....what a lovely word. And this post is lovely too.
Aaw thank you Lydia xx :o)
So much said in such a short space. Love the story. Pig-face...makes you wonder how she really feels.
Thanks Clipped Wings x :o)
Whooooooo i MISSED THIS!!!!
so much hugs from Indiana
Leontien
Thanks Leontien, so much hugs to you too xx :o)
Just stumbled across your post now and found my morning smile!
I'm so glad, thanks for stumbling by Kathy :o) x
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