Wednesday, 12 October 2011

Friends - Three Word Wednesday

He couldn't help but admire her.
That she had the confidence to walk like that, hips wiggling like they were alive; independent of her waist.
He called her 'a piece of work', joked she'd cause an accident, have cars running off the road.
That she ought to have a licence for that thing.
They were best friends.
Truth was he was smitten; would follow her to the ends of the Earth - if only she'd ask him.
She ruffled his hair. "Come on pig face, let's get a coffee."


 Three Word Wednesday where you write something using the three prompt words.   This week's words are ...  admire, piece and follow.

55 comments:

Laurie Kolp said...

Haha- cute ending!

Linda said...

Reminds me of a line in a country song: "We hate to see her leave, but we love to watch her go." :)

Rashmi said...

So cute story...
So lucky to have that confidence to know that he will foolow her to the end of earth...

Morning said...

bless her,
bless him.

lovely story told.

Bethe77 said...

I could so hear this converstation. Great write and wonderful use of the words.
Blessing

anthonynorth said...

Great affection in this. Enjoyed the read.

Lena said...

My kind of love-lines......! Nicely fitted....!

jaerose said...

Aah, it's good to read you again..you never fail to make me smile..Jae :)

dandelion girl said...

I really enjoyed how you used the words! Brilliantly done :)

Sheilagh Lee said...

aw I hope she notices his feelings soon and feels the same

Alice Audrey said...

Pig face? That's not a good sign. Poor guy.

Cяystal said...

Such stuff makes my day. So cute :]

Deborah said...

Thank you everso much everyone for your great comments :o) x

Daydreamertoo said...

He sounds like a love sick puppy.. awww... Hope she doens't insult him too much ;)
Thanks for the smile.

Altonian said...

I have heard 'pig-face' used as a term of endearment; it worked then too.

Al Penwasser said...

I really admire this piece of yours. If I didn't already, I would follow you.
Pig face, huh?
Hmmmmm, I'm up for some bacon.

Mary said...

An endearing poem!!

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

hahaha... you got me there... I like it.. lot's of fun from top to bottom...

JJRod'z

oldegg said...

If it wasn't a doting bloke it could well have been a faithful dog. Either way I was smitten with them both.

andy sewina said...

Love the bit about pig face!

Mamma has spoken said...

Pig face and yet he loves her. I need a man like that.

Shauna said...

this poem is not only well written
but very true to life.

Ava said...

A humorous ending. I enjoyed reading this piece! My 3WW: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/10/12/believe/

Deborah said...

Thank you so much for your comments, they really made me smile :o) x

Selma said...

Awww. If only.... This was gorgeous!

Deborah said...

:o) Thanks Selma xx

Friko said...

yes, I've known it to happen.

W.C.Camp said...

I know other comments noted 'Pig Face' but I was going on, really enjoying the images of your prose and then I hit 'Pig Face' and it was like getting hit in the face with a cream pie! Laughing all the way to the 'facilities' so I can clean myself up! GREAT! W.C.C.

Medhini said...

it's a real cute story... Bless you...

Elizabeth Grimes said...

Aw! Cute, yet bittersweet.

mangetoutetc said...

Nice!

Muhammad Israr said...

ahan... cute little poem ...and lol@ pig face...
hope didnt cause any accidents on the road :)

Deborah said...

Thank you so much for your lovely comments :o) xx

That gentleman's lady said...

Awh...

This made me smile... It's altogether too true sometimes.

Deborah said...

Thanks Lady x :o)

Cяystal said...

Update soon, love.:)

Deborah said...

Will do :o) Thanks Crystal x

jabblog said...

So sweet - unrequited love.

Deborah said...

:o) thanks for stopping by jabblog x

Gizmo said...

I enjoyed reading it! Such a nice story :)

Deborah said...

Thank you Gizmo :o) x

Tracy said...

ahhh, love your story and I can write those three words into once sentence...
I certainly admire that piece of artwork; therefore, I must follow her success.

Deborah said...

:o) well done! Thanks for stopping by Tracy x

Nezzy said...

Awwww, this is the stuff great songs are made of!!!

I love it sweetie!

God bless ya and have a fantastic weekend!!! :o)

Deborah said...

Thanks Nezzy, and lovely to see you :o) x

Catherine said...

It sounds like love to me!!
xo Catherine

Deborah said...

:o) certainly does! Thanks for stopping by Catherine x

Lydia said...

Awww, this is adorable! Like anthonynorth said in his comments: "Great affection in this." Affection....what a lovely word. And this post is lovely too.

Deborah said...

Aaw thank you Lydia xx :o)

Clipped Wings said...

So much said in such a short space. Love the story. Pig-face...makes you wonder how she really feels.

Deborah said...

Thanks Clipped Wings x :o)

Leontien said...

Whooooooo i MISSED THIS!!!!


so much hugs from Indiana
Leontien

Deborah said...

Thanks Leontien, so much hugs to you too xx :o)

Kathy Bischoping said...

Just stumbled across your post now and found my morning smile!

Deborah said...

I'm so glad, thanks for stumbling by Kathy :o) x