Eyes skyward
I feast on cobalt blue.
White confetti rains
dove drenched
winged and alive.
A viable canvas
for dreams.
I gasp, smile
rendered mute.
Three Word Wednesday where you write something using the three prompt words. This week's words are ... gasp, mute and viable.
33 comments:
The glory of our world is astounding, I agree!
Refreshing. :)
Well-written so that I can visualize
the beauty of the sky and beyond.
I fell for the spirituality of
your poem.
Great it is to appreciate our world.
Thanks for your visit to my blog.
A sky full of possibilities..one that makes you gasps when you see it..grab it whilst you can absolutely..Jae
"winged and alive" - as if the dreamer is an angel :) Beautiful
sometimes nature in all it's glory awes us.
Lovely & Smart piece of writing!
Thank you all everso much for visiting, and for your lovely comments x :o)
Sunsets do that to me, especially as I walk past my kitchen window.
What a vivid image you paint.
Beautiful and peaceful.
Very lovely. (:
The picture your words painted was so easy to visualise. Beautiful.
Thank you everso much for your comments everyone x :o)
lovely words :)
Love - A viable canvas
for dreams. Beautiful image.
You gave those three words a place to dwell in celebration of nature. Very soulful.
That's good thinking, girly! I love it!
When we feel the joy of life there's no better feeling, is there?
You've caught that feeling here with this. Lovely.
And, thanks for visiting me and the comment, too.
Thank you all for your lovely comments :o) x
Beautiful, vivid!
"feast on cobalt blue". I yearn to tilt my face to the sky and just breath. One day...
Beautiful, Deborah.
"Eyes skyward I feast on cobalt blue." My eyes are often skyward, so I really related to that line of your poem.
You have a really visual style of writing that I really love. You can just see it and convey what it is in such a lyrical way. The image of the viable canvas for dreams is gorgeous. This is one of my favourite pieces of yours!
Thank you everso much for your comments everyone xxx
i'm reading through the links at three word wednesday. so far, this is my favorite. :)
Aaw thank you so much jennifaye x :o)
The natural world overwhelms me this way sometimes. Gifts all around.
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/19/failed-migration/
Paints a beautiful picture.
Thank you Kim and Jessica :o) x
Love the use of the words on this prompt.
I love the sky myself!
Wonderful!
Blessings
Thank you so much Beth77 x :o)
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