Saturday Centus prompt this week is to use up to 150 words, dialogue only, using "Are you seriously ordering another martini,"
"Are you seriously ordering another martini?"
"Why not? ... I've only had three."
"No you haven't, you've had seven!"
"Noo ... I can't have had seven."
"You have, I promise you."
"But I can't have!"
"Why not?"
"Because my legs always give out after I've had five!"
"Your legs have given out!"
"No?!"
"Yes!"
"Oh ... that'll be it then."
"What'll be it?"
"Why you suddenly got taller than me about half an hour ago!"
58 comments:
It made me laugh out loud, I love it. :-)
Teehee! Cute! I'm laughing picturing how short caterpillars legs are!
A good time was had by nearly all..
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Ah, martinis! This person might be trying to live up to this quote from Dean Martin,
"You're not drunk if you can lie on the floor without holding on." Great centus!
Namaste............cj
Lol! Based on a true story?
Oh this is seriously too good! Why do I say? Because it flows so well. Really? Absolutely... It just makes me want to join in with you. Really, are you serious. Absolutely, just a great Saturday Centus for me...Oh yeah, where were you last week? At a wedding!
Hi, I just had to pop in and read your great "another martini' story.
From the happy hills and hollers of the Missouri Ponderosa, ya'll have a blessed and beautiful weekend...ya hear??? :o)
LOL, too funny. Really loved the dialogue. Good use of the prompt, ha.
Love this silly, fun centus. Thanks for the laugh. Great job.
xoRobyn
Hahaha...very good!
very good...hahahah!
I don't think I could string a sentence together after 3 myself, funny one.
Heh! I like this one. I'm still trying to come up with my own entry. I had an idea similar to this, but I'll be ixnaying that, I suppose!
Cool conversation! This was a tricky prompt and you have done well.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 73'Lunch with B&V'
What a hoot!!!! My legs give out after just ONE!!!
LOL ;-)
Very funny! Good job!
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My scene was as inebriated as yours!
Hah. Nice :)
I'm short, so everyone's taller than I. I wouldn't have noticed "taller" after seven martinis
Great post. Followed :)
Very funny! Thanks for the morning giggle. Kat
Very funny:-)Well done!
Th is is great stuff, the ending me flipping...I am on the floor LMAO.
hahaha that was defiantly funny!
Thanks for sharing
Leontien
Sadly, I've been there before....
hahahaha. that would totally be me, getting shorter.
Thank you everso much everyone for all your lovely comments :o) xx
Martinis will do that to you - you don't feel tipsy at all until you try to stand up. Hilarious!
Oh, this is rich! I love how clever it is and how the dialogue flows so naturally to the great last line. :)
Thank you Selma and Lydia :o) xx
hahahah...nice dialog...great depiction of the scene... loved it :)
Great ending! ;)
Haha ~ very funny! How talented you are ~ very fun!
xo Catherine
Thank you so much for stopping by and your great comments Muhammad, Lemons and Catherine :o) x
Ha! Good one. :)
LOL! Loved this! Great job!
Thank you Linda and Tgoette :o) xx
Ha ha....funny...
:o) Thank you Rashmi x
One martini
Two martini
Three martini floor
Four martooney
Fife mertoonish
Ya wanna fight???????
LOL ... very fuuny Al, thanks for stopping by :o) x
Hate it when that happens!
Me too! LOL ... thanks for stopping by lolamouse :o( x
Haha. This is hilarious.
Thank you Zeba :o) x
I'll say Cheers to that!
Cheers nimaruichi :o) x
Oh, I am laughing. Great job! Thanks for the laugh. laurie
That last line is a clincher. Hilarious!`
Thank You Laurie and Kim :o) xx
Hysterical. :)
:o) Thanks Nessa, and thanks for stopping by x
haha...too funny...i was wondering why you suddenly got taller...lol
:o) Thanks Brian x
Oh my gosh! This cracked me up! Love, love,loved this!
Thank you Jenny :o) x
hahaha!
:o) thanks for popping by earlybird x
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